Is Baggage Affecting Your Relationships?

by | Nov 25, 2014 | Relationships | 9 comments

I had so much fun shooting my very first video during my trip to Italy. Here is the result; let me know what you think!

ARE YOU TRAVELING LIGHT? THE SECRET TO BUILDING DYNAMIC HAPPY RELATIONSHIPS.

 

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9 Comments

  1. anneke moser kruijning
    anneke moser kruijning on November 25, 2014 at 8:18 pm

    Gefeliciteerd! Leuk geworden, a very happy Hi! Gezellig muziekje! Xx

  2. Hope
    Hope on November 27, 2014 at 6:24 pm

    Wise as usual. Well done! Provocative. Thanks.

    • admin
      admin on November 30, 2014 at 12:13 am

      Thank you, Hope! Happy you liked it.

  3. Emily Newberry
    Emily Newberry on November 29, 2014 at 12:14 am

    Hi Berry,
    Nice job! Very upbeat and mostly clear what you are saying. I have a couple of thoughts that I think would give it more impact. 1) There are several times when you repeat words or phrases unnecessarily. In the beginning when talking about yourself and the other women there are phrases that talk about “us” and later you repeat whether twice. I could give a couple of other examples. 2) Some of your descriptions, like the one that says what a nice place you are visiting at the end, are a bit cliched and not central to your message. I would leave them out or find other words to use. 3) The volume of the music at the end was noticeably louder than your voice, and I jumped to change the volume control. I think that is unnecessarily jarring. If you can fix that I would think it is a bonus.
    Hugs,
    Em

    • admin
      admin on November 30, 2014 at 12:12 am

      Hi Emily,
      thanks so much for your thoughtful feedback. These comments are very helpful for when I make my next video! I appreciate it very much.
      Warmly, Berry

  4. Joy
    Joy on December 1, 2014 at 5:44 pm

    Very impressive, Berry. You’re extremely articulate and appealing. The video is short and quite professional for a novice. My feedback, if you’re seeking it, is that you cut sooner to your main point and expand on that. This is an auspicious beginning!!

    • admin
      admin on December 1, 2014 at 7:10 pm

      Hi Joy,
      Aww, thank you so much for the nice feedback. I’ll keep it in mind and it makes sense. I was just having too much fun!
      Berry

  5. Ronnie Noize
    Ronnie Noize on December 8, 2014 at 11:51 pm

    What a wonderfully charming video, Berry! I love your message and your presentation–very fresh and authentic. Looking forward to seeing more from you, gal.

    • admin
      admin on December 9, 2014 at 12:20 am

      Hi Ronnie, thank you, your feedback means a lot to me!